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In the past, people always communicate with each other by chatting in their leisure time. But nowadays technology are growing vary fast, computer is necessity in the normal life for everyone. They communicate on the internet instead of talking face to face. The mode bring advantage everyone can chat someone who never known before. You can know a lot of people in all kinds of any field. But because you don't realize someone in detail, so maybe you will encounter liar or bad guy, in the worst you will get into trouble and lose some money even dead.
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