雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉，要加强拼写。

At present,as the rapid developing of technology especially for the transportation,more and more people can have the access to travel abroad,which raises a hot discussion,people hold two opposite views,some think it really a positive thing,while others disagree.As a saying goes,each coin has both sides,so does the abroad traveling. For individuals,travel is a good to broaden their sight,what you see is totally different with what you are experiencing, especially for abroad traveling,you can enjoy different sightseeing and cultures,which makes feel a sense of compete,what's more traveling is the best way to relax yourself,getting out of the heavy work and going sigthtseeng,what's a happy thing. For countries,more abroad traveling means the increasing attractivity of the coutries,which illustrates the higher international status and more charming,also,with the increasing number of people traveling, the talk between two countries will be inhenced,which do a great deal to world peace. However,since traveling abroad needs plenty of money,it may become a big burden to family economy,and lacking the talk with foreign people or we can say not so fluent foreign language could make this travel not so appealing,also, since not all people getting into your country are polite,it may have an big influence on the countries' environment and safety. as for me,i hold the opinion cons overview discons.