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文章用词灵活多样,但单词拼写错误较多;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above, a variety of cultures, such as science, natrue, religion, costume, deology and the like, are cooked together. There is a topic under the illustration, which says 'the cuisine of culture is not only delicious but nutritious. the cartoon gives an episode of the effect of interaction among diverse culture. As the pace of globalization of economy and commerce, the role which culture plays is distinguish. For one thing, the integration provide a platform for us to enrich our knowlege and broaden our horizen, which, to varying degrees, bridges the enormous gap between dream and reality. For another, although that outside culture flows in brought some detrimental information, the integration of culture make the oppotunity to experience colorful world imposible. By comparison, if we are confined and exclude everything without reason, chances are that we are doomed to lag behind the world and more likely it is that we are subject to the risk of perich. It is no exaggeration to say that the integration of culuture exerts so tremendous influence on our life that it is not only a living proof whether we lead a right road and is associated with whether we will fulfil our destiny. Undoutly, the more advanced cultrue you learn, the more likely it is that you will achieve great accomplishment. How magnificent our life would be did we master all that is beneficial and powerful intelecture and culture.