2002年考研英语作文真题:An American girl in traditional Chinese costume

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。

From what is vividly depicted in the painting,we can observe distinctly that it is an American girl who is wearing the traditional Chinese costume that looks extremly beautiful.Probably not only may it be an ordinary picture,but also conveys profound and lasting meaning:more and more foreigners will pay close attention to China. Why do an increasing number of foreigners be attracted by China?On the basis of my judgment,three factors contribute to it.In the first place,ever since we opened our door to the world,our economic situation is soaring day to day.Consequently,people who want to make profit from China need to learn a plenty of knowledges China throughly.For instance,Chinese breakfast is sold by KFC that is an tremendous American company.In the second place,the reason why many people are fascinated by Chinese traditional culture is that China has more 5000 year's histories than most of the other countries.In the third place,China government establishs such an extraordinary good reputation in the world that many other countries hope to communicate with us frequently. In brief,it is with the great development of our economy that most of the people like to learn China.Therefore,everybody of our country should try our best to improve our international prestige.