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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
As is symbolically illustrated in the picture, the reactions toward the broken bowel are diverse between two young men. Instead of being disappointed just like the left one, the other one is smiling heartily when he find that there is still water in the bowel. The purpose of the cartoon is to show us that utmost importance should be attached to positive attitude. For one should know that one's attitude is related to one's life even success. Nowadays positive attitude can be ascribed to many business successes. For instance, Jobs, the chairperson of Apple, have the confidence that his produce would be popular around the world and he will succeed finally. Hence he achieved his gold. Otherwise, he would never be famous without positive attitude. As a consequence, positive attitude is not something that we can afford to leave or lost it at large. And how to acquired positive attitude? No doubt, different people have diverse ways, the following are mine: the first secret is being confident, we tend to pay almost attention on the cultivation of our certain skills, but it is truer to put proper emphasis on our confidence. In addition, perhaps if we shift our life gold from ultimate success to unswerving efforts, we would be more positive.
