拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Chinese language is our Mother tongue and we can’t do without it in daily life. However, most of the students have been ignoring learning Chinese in recent years which should be given more attention. Using Chinese language every day with almost no difficulty, a lot of students think it’s unnecessary to spend time learning Chinese. As well as many students believe learning Chinese is boring so that refuse to continue to learn. If we turn a blind eye, it will get more serious. There will be fewer and fewer people knowing the broad and profound of Chinese and the spread of Chinese culture will be affected. And students’ Chinese level is limited which is bad for their comprehensive quality. As far as I am concerned, schools should attach great importance to students’ Chinese learning and students also pay more attention to it. It is a great idea that improve students' interest in learning by holding all kinds of activities of Chinese. We can try to find the happiness of learning Chinese, if you do,you would love it.