托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第25篇:人们的成功是否只与努力工作有关与运气无关

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There is no guarantee that we can ignore the significance of luck. On the basis of reasonable analysis, we could easily come to the conclusion that luck can be a vehicle toward success. For examples, even though we work really hard we still need someone's recognition. What's more, weather we can express the best self is also leaning on luck. Appreciation from teacher or boss will definitely exert a positive influence on our success. Therefore, we are confronted with the question whether can we meet the helpful person? It, by no means, can be solved by our hard working. We have to wait for their appearing after we have done our otmost to prepare. Take my father's experience as a example, when he tried to join in the college entrance examination again, he had some difficulties to find a school that arewilling to accept him because of the shortage of money. But at right time, his previous teacher did him a favor letting him delay the payment. My dad was always a good student in school addicted to stuying and had done everything well except the final exam. He was not at the condition, so he failed. Nevertheless, it's his effort that touched his teacher who are willing offer him the delay. At last, my father smoothly pass the exam. Every year, he will go to visit that kind teacher for showing gratefullness. Without him, everything will changed. Moreover nobody, on my observations, can always be in best condition. Put it in another words, we may lose if we are not demonstrating our ability. That's why I vote for the statement that luck is a essential ingredient for our success. If we happen to adjust ourselves to the condition where we are able to showing the hallmark that the judge man is pursuing, then we could success. Continuing to take my father's first experience of college entrance examination as an illustration, far from being good, he felt headache and disgusted during the exam. That's really out of his control. He cannot even finish half of the paper. Then everything went worst. Admittedly, there is no doubt that your ability is the prerequisite for success. Opportunity is available for somebody who has prepared well. But it's wrong to equal minor to nothing. Luck can still cast an effect on our success. Just like the statement above, a helpful friend or a good condition can help you a lot. Luck does have some effectiveness.