在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;过程性词汇偏少;作者词汇表达不够多样,要注意单词拼写的检查;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
June 23th, 2008 Dear sir, My name is liming,who is 18 years,is a middle student. The news where from local newspaper i hear. I apply for the position of volunteer in BeiJin Olmpics .Not only like help each other,but also have a keen interest in PE. I have a good command of english. I would appliciate if i contribute to country. Thank you for your cosideration . You sincerely Li Ming