小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have many friends.one of my best friends is lily. lily is 12 years old ,she is beautiful and cute.In school,we help each other .she lives near from me .so, we ofen by bus together go to school and back .we feel happy when we together,we can laugh,cry and so on . we are always friend.