2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Over the last half century ,all respects in our life have made significant change due to the scientific and technological breakthroughs,which contribute to the quality of life.However,as we all know,one coin has two side,on one hand ,our life becomes more convenient and comfortable,on the other hand,flaws and drawbacks gradually appear,which need us to fix immediately.The quality of life is not always satisfying. So,what leads the quality of life to decreasing?I would like to say there are three important points,just as follows.As first,the over urbanization and industrialization lead so many people swarm into the downtown.Like traffic jam,medical insecurity,we do not get enough guarantee.Second of all,the urban environment is decreasing,such as the island effect,water pollution,sand storm.It is the beautiful scene is utterly gone that once on vacation,citizens prefer to go out of the town rather than stay and breath the polluted air.Last but not least,citizens must put up with the fierce competition so that they can get what they want. Based on those above reasons,I assume we can improve our life quality by different means.On the side,the government should struggle to normalize the policies,which make sure the law force.On the other side,since we live in the crowed city,we must learn to adapt to it and do our utter most to protect it,thus we can be satisfactory. In conclusion,as long as the government and the citizens hold together to deal with it,we difinitely improve the quality of our life in future.