2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

What an impressive picture it is!In the picture,a boat is on the lake and two boys seating in the boat are throwing the rubbish into the lake.And there is too much rubbish flowing arouNd the boat.The content of the drawer in purpose to tell us that do no pollute the evorinment when you are traveling. As is portrayed in the picture,our evorinment is facing on a huge chanllege.What does this phemomenon take place?I assume there are some factors.In the first place,Chinese have more and more money to go for a travel with the development of economy.however,on the other hand,people do not have the idea to protect the public evorinment. What we can do to deal with the issue?As far as I am concerned,to begin with,we should make some drastic laws to prevent the behavors injuring the evorinment;meanwhile,enhanceing people's awareness is also important.Finally,I believe that we human will recover this difficult,and only by doing this can we live in a beautiful future.