2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

What an impressive picture it is!In the picture,a boat is on the lake and two boys seating in the boat are throwing the rubbish into the lake.And there is too much rubbish flowing around the boat.The content of the drawer in purpose to tell us that do no pollute the envorinment when you are traveling. As is portrayed in the picture,our envorinment is facing on a huge challenge.What does this phemomenon take place?I assume there are some factors.In the first place,Chinese have more and more money to go for a travel with the development of economy.however,on the other hand,people do not have the idea to protect the public evorinment. What we can do to deal with the issue?As far as I am concerned,to begin with,we should make some drastic laws to prevent the behavors injuring the envorinment;meanwhile,enhanceing people's awareness is also important.Finally,I believe that we human will recover this difficult,and only by doing this can we live in a beautiful future.