2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇词汇使用准确，但要避免拼写出错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

What an impressive picture it is!In the picture,a boat is on the lake and two boys seating in the boat are throwing the rubbish into the lake.And there is too much rubbish flowing around the boat.The content of the drawer in purpose to tell us that do no pollute the envorinment when you are traveling. As is portrayed in the picture,our envorinment is facing on a huge challenge.What does this phenomenon take place?I assume there are some factors.In the first place,Chinese have more and more money to go for travel with the development of economy.However,on the other hand,people do not have the idea to protect the public evorinment. What we can do to deal with the issue?As far as I am concerned,to begin with,we should make some drastic laws to prevent the behaviors injuring the envorinment;meanwhile,enhancing people's awareness is also important.Finally,I believe that we human will recover this difficult,and only by doing this can we live in a beautiful future.