2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Dear Jim: As one of your best friends,I am writing this letter in purpose of to recommend you one of my favorite movies,and I wish you will fall in love with it. The film,which is called High School is my favorite movie for these factors.In the first place,it talks about a story happening in a high school.The roles are students in high school so that you will fell close to them.In the second place,it is a story about love and grown,the friendship will impress you a lot. All in all,I hope you will have a good time about watching this movie.It's my pleasure to share my happiness.