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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Nowadays,Education pays more and more.we can take some information from below pictures.Unemployment rate in 2011,the Doctoral degree is 2.5%.It is the lowest.and the higerest is less than high school diploma.the pitures shows that, peples income is belong to he's degree.so even if education pays is expensive, nowdays,Education pays more and more.we can take some information from below pitures.Unemployment rate in 2011,the Doctoral degree is 2.5%.It is the lowest.and the higerest is less than high school diploma.the pitures shows that, peples income is belong to he's degree.so even if education pays is expensive,
