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In my opinion,I'm against college students hire cleaners. First,college students make a living by their parents.They don't know that it is difficult to make money for parents.They also don't cherish them. Second,To hire cleaners is not beneficial for students.They will be lazy than before . In addition.They will keep a good habit from doing a simple thing. As a result,As a student,we should be responsible to keep a good habit from simple things.Not being lazy. No pain,no gain. And cherish others gain,you will be respected.
