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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(49):刘娟的来信

发布时间:2014-11-27 10:58浏览次数:428
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Directions :Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese .

假如你是某家英文报社的编辑,昨日收到一位中学生读者刘娟的来信。请根据来信内容用英语写一封不少于120字的回信。


Dear Editor,
I am a hardworking girl and want to be the number one in my class. But in the exams, I always make mistakes that I should have avoided. I really worry about it. What can I do to improve my performance in exams?
Wang Li
Dear Liu Juan,
It’s good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams.
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Editor
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Dear Liu Juan, It's good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams. You said that you always make mistakes in the exams and worry about it. You want to improve your performance in exams. I think you are under the pressure of the number one in your class. I think that it is your reason. And I give you a piece of advice. You must be relaxed in exams. So please review the below: The first, you will have a relaxation every day. If you working hard every day, you are very tired. So you need have a relaxation a moment during your studying. (2) You will take a breath when you can't ask any questions in exams. (3) You must double check your answers when you will complete these questions in exams. I think that you will be a high mark if you will according to my advice.

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