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Nowadays,a lot of shops are shows an image that goods are excessive packaged,the main purpose of packaging is to protect the goods from damage,but now many of them are lose this function. what's cause that?I think the reason is complexing but i still can list two.Firstly,now many manufacturers wants to attract the customers's eyes by packaging their goods beautiful,so that selling the products quickly.Secondly, a large number of people are tends to buy some gifts with beautiful and elegant packages in order to express their sincere and friendly .This is an important factor that urge the sellers to over package their goods. For my part,excessive packaging will have a bad influence on social development because that not only cause the waste of resources but also cover the problems of products,so that many customers will be cheated by the good packages.So i think we should reject to buy the goods with over packages so as to aviod the waste of material ,and it will be very helpful for the social continuous development.