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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9792
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

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Nowadays,a lot of shops are shows an image that goods are excessive packaged,the main purpose of packaging is to protect the goods from damage,but now many of them are lose this function. what's cause that?I think the reason is complexing but i still can list two.Firstly,now many manufacturers wants to attract the customers's eyes by packaging their goods beautiful,so that selling the products quickly.Secondly, a large number of people are tends to buy some gifts with beautiful and elegant packages in order to express their sincere and friendly .This is an important factor that urge the sellers to over package their goods. For my part,excessive packaging will have a bad influence on social development because that not only cause the waste of resources but also cover the problems of products,so that many customers will be cheated by the good packages.So i think we should reject to buy the goods with over packages so as to aviod the waste of material ,and it will be very helpful for the social continuous development.

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