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2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:23浏览次数:1455
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Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of the technology,more and more people incline to use phone in place of writing to each other,which triggers a problem whether phones will kill letter writing.Some people are heartily in favor of this point.Equally,other people have some disagreements.From my perspective, letter writing will never vanish from our lives.The following is my reasons. For one thing,although phones bring too much benefits for us,it is not suit every occasion.For example,if you want to borrow money from someone,writing letter is the best method to avoid embarrassment or if you want to tell someone who you love,but you are afraid of saying to him or her for yourself,writing is the most suitable choice.For another,writing letters can be collected to remember some unforgettable experience,but phones cannot be collected.When you become old,you can recall your wonderful things through reading writing letter that you collect for years. In conclusion,although phones are more prevalent than writing,phones can never take the place of writing.Writing has its unique function that phones haven't.

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