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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(48):发帖寻求帮助

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要求：: 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫 Mike的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助。请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求回帖。
Hi, everyone,
I’m 18 years old and I’m going to a university in Beijing this autumn. My parents insist on going with me to help me settle down. But I think I can manage it all by myself. How can I make them change their ideas?
写作要点：
1.告诉Mike要理解父母亲；
2.给Mike提出解决问题的具体建议。
写作要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。
3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
4.书写须清晰、工整。
Hi, Mike,
As a student of your age, I understand your situation._____________

用户的作文（系统评分79.0分）

评语：

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文：

Dear Mike, And i want to share with you some of my ideas. Firstly,what i want you know is that all of things your parents do for you aim at making you better.And the purpose they want to go to Beijing with you is taking care of you.So you should understand them.Secondly,if you really want to be independent and without accompany of your parents,let them know and give a reasonable explanation.I think your parents will respect your thought.Finally,when talking with your parents, you'd better keep calm and polity instead of performing impatiently or angrily. I hope that my suggestions can benefit you greatly and help you get out of the trouble.Looking forward to good news from you.

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