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Today there are lots of students ignion the spelling .As we can see,students aren't represent for their homework.when you read a student's homework ,you will be aware of you can't understand it. For this case ,I think there are three reasons contribute to it.First ,nowdays parents and teachers aren't strict with us.secondly ,with the computer using widely we hardly write by ourselves.last but not least,we become very lazy when technoloage change our life enormously.