托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第25篇:人们的成功是否只与努力工作有关与运气无关

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As a people,we had been experienced failure and succeed in our life.So that we would think why we can succeed or failure.As the Einstein said that what we knew is so original and simple,and failure is normal from seeking the truth.Now that it is often,why we can succeed? I would rather think luck plays a important roles in that.Thinking that why we can live in so advanced society is that people observe the nature and apply it which got from nature in our life.But if you are not enough luck even you are very smart you are not succeed. I think that the born of Wright brother’s first biplane is a typical example.Imaging that if they did not watch the birds by accident and if they are in ancient times and there are not technology to help their image come ture.The same things happened to Newton.A day the apple hit Newton and the law of universal gravitation was borned.The very luckily things happened to Newton and he became the famous physicist.There is not doubt he is a luck man and very smart. The luck is important for a people as well as hard work.When you are keeping hard work and the luck will come with.It is so quickly from nothing to everything.All of you need just hard work and luck.