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hao cities begin Do you know hao cities begin? Long ago,there were a few thround people in the world.These people were living for hunting animals from one place to the another. Later,people learned hao to plant,therefore,they settled together and seted up villages. Then the population increased,the villages grew bigger and developed to cities.