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With the development of technology and economy,online shopping is more and more popular,and many people prefer to shopping online than go shopping outside. Why so many people like to shopping online?the reason is obvious.First,online shopping can offer many benefits to people,such as save time,save money and convenient.Second,people can buy some sepcial goods online those are difficult to be found in shops.But at the same time,we also should to observe the disadvanages of online shopping.For example,many people could be misled by the wrong information or could buy some products with bad quanlity.as a result of that,the consumers' rights will not be ensured. In berif,online shopping can have a good influence on people's daily life,but it also will cause some problems to people.So people should be careful when they shopping online , and people ought to learn how to use of internet in a right way.
