小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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my name is HaiYang Jin. my name is Alan. my Family have my Father and I. my mother and sister.and my brother.my Family play phone and ipad and computer and Go to the park and Look TV. and eat Rice Bread sanwich and apple pie and Pumpkin pie and cake and Noodles My Family Drink Water and Fruit juice.