雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:审查制度 Censorship

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In contemporary,TV and movies are playing significant roles in our lives .But in the meantime, whether no harm to allow children to watch the programmes which consist of violence has become a highly debatable issue .Some individuals assert that there is no harm to the children while many others argue that there is detrimental to children .To a large extent ,my point of view, i am in favor of the former one . There is no denying that the media is made of violence and pornography .However, apart from this ,it is still numerous merits .In terms of educational channel ,children can learn a lot from it .Discovery,for example,is a case in point .Moreover,with guidance,children will get to know how to avoid some criminals acts .Specifically,children tend to be impulsive ,that is to say ,impulsive behavior will bring about committing a crime.Last but not least,provided that some shows are really stimulating .The children enjoy themselves . In contrast,some others tend to think that this sort of programme is harmful to children .The reason for this is that the chhildren are influential .And they don't have the judgement skills that adults do .It seems true the children do not judge the right or wrong .But I would say this does not very convincing since the programmes must contain some valuable information to the children .For instance,violating the law must be punishment. Having considered all the arguments above,it is no harm to the children if parents give them some supervision .