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I am going to the new school. So I have a new teacher.She is my English teacher. She has a black singel long hair.She's lesson is very instering.She is very funny. She always to laugh our classmates.She is very tall,and she is very beautiful.Everyone like her in our class.She always wears a blue shirt,and a black sagirt.