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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3976
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,pressure makes people out of breath.Even worse, in consequence of pressure, numerous people feel sick.So that keeping a good mood becomes sorely essential under whatever circumstances.Speaking for myself,we cannot emphasize the importance of keeping a good mood too much.Following,I'll list some of its advantages. Firstly,in work, as the intensive competition,quite a few people incline to put more and more pressure on themselves,which can contribute to break their body down sooner or later if they cannot keep a good mood.Only keeping a good mood can they get rid of the burden of stress quickly.Otherwise,they'll be overwhelmed.Secondly,in hospital,keeping a good mood can prompt patients' recovery.For some people who are on the brink of death, keeping a good mood not only can soothe their emotion,but also postpone their deadline.Eventually,for life,our life expectancy will be doubled if we keep a good mood.Generally a positive and enthusiastic man lives longer than a pessimism.Thus,if you itch to live longer,you are fate to keep a good mood. In conclusion,keeping a good mood can improve the quality of our lives,as well as length our life.On no account can we be a slave of the bad mood.We must perceive that keeping a good mood is consequential.

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