正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I am going to the new school. So I have a new teacher.She is my English teacher. She has a black long hair.She's lesson is very insterring.She is very funny. She always to laugh our classmates.She is very tall,and she is very beautiful.Everyone like her in our class.She always wears a blue shirt,and a black skirt.