2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以；请注意分段。

Nowadays,pressure makes people out of breath.Even worse, in consequence of pressure, numerous people feel sick.So that keeping a good mood becomes sorely essential under whatever circumstances.Speaking for myself,we cannot emphasize the importance of keeping a good mood too much.Following,I'll list some of its advantages. Firstly,in work, as the intensive competition,quite a few people incline to put more and more pressure on themselves,which can break their body down sooner or later if they cannot preserve a good mood.Only keeping a good mood can they get rid of the burden of stress quickly.Otherwise,they'll be overwhelmed.Secondly,in hospital,keeping a good mood can prompt patients' recovery.For some people who are on the brink of death, keeping a good mood not only can soothe their emotion,but also postpone their deadline.Eventually,for life,our life expectancy will be doubled if we preserve a good mood.Generally a positive and enthusiastic man lives longer than a pessimism.Thus,if you itch to live longer,you are fate to preserve a good mood. In conclusion,keeping a good mood can improve the quality of our lives,as well as length our life.On no account can we be a slave of the bad mood.We must perceive that keeping a good mood is consequential.