小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Xiao Xue is my good friend. She is very beautiful。She has a long black hair。She is thin, the skin is very white, sweet smile, I like to hold her to sleep together，She is very good to me, always take care of me, between us two no words don't talk, we are the best close friend.