小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

To learn English is for future having a better life primarily. My family is agricultural primarily.Because of our village is a geography lower place. A flooded water swept cross in the last year, autumn. We have lost a great number of possessions. More than 100 people were homeless and were hurt. Over 20 people drowned by the accident.