小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Xiao Xue is my best friend.She entered our class last semester. She is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest.Xiao Xue works hard at his lessons. She often studies late into the night.No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects.She loves popular songs and classical music, too.Such is my friend, a clever and kind girl.I highly value the friendship with him.