作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
To learn English is for future having a better life primarily. My family is agricultural primarily.Because of our village is a low-lying place. A flood swept cross in the last year, autumn. We have lost a great of property. More than 100 people were homeless and were hurt. Over 20 people drowned by the accident.