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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36985
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy.Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time.Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match.Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night.No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects.He loves popular songs and classical music, too. There are three people in his family and he is the only child.His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress.Though Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed.He dreams of being a lawyer in the future. Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy.I highly value the friendship with him.

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