小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

To learn English is for future having a better life primarily. My family is agricultural primarily.Because of our village is a low-lying place. A flood swept cross in the last year, autumn. We have lost possessions even unable to know it. More than 100 people were homeless and were hurt. Over 20 people drowned by the accident.