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The Impact of The Internet on Education With development of the society in China, the number of the people who are online is increasing. For this phenomena, some people put their opinions. What's impact of the Internet on our life, especially on our education. And now, let me express my views. To be honest, I think this is a good thing for us because it means our living standard is improved. Besides, Internet can help us learn a lot. For example, if you meet some questions that you don't know, but you can't find anyone to answer you, you can surf the Internet to fins it out. What's more, there are so many information you can get through the Internet. So it's really very great to help you know more and you can have a better understanding of the world. In another word, it opens your eyes. Finally, it's convenient. You can get what you want without asking anyone else. From this point, it saves your time so that you can improve your efficiency. But, we also can not ignore that Internet have some bad impacts on our study. If you spend all you time on the Internet, you will be addicted to it. And, there also some bad information that is not very well for us to learn. Concerning the two angles of this problem, we can make a conclusion that we should use Internet properly and make it as our assistant instead of a killer of education.
