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字数:300 满分:100分
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I was not busy yesterday but deliver samples to the warehouse. It took me 3 hours on the way. I began to complain this boring task. When I came back on the way, Lisa called me that she was arriving from FS to GZ. I was a little surprise. I haven't seen her for a long time since she backed home.