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I was not busy yesterday but deliver samples to the warehouse. It took me 3 hours on the way. I began to complain this situation . When I came back on the way, Lisa called me that she was arriving from FS to GZ. I was a little surprise. I haven't seen her for a long time since she backed home. I told her that I had to arrange my classes for the next week, and ask her that she could go to WEB together with me when she arrived. unfortunately, there was a bad traffic jam that she did not come till 10 P.M. She spent 6 hours in the way! As you can imagine how serious traffic jam was! After work, I went to WEB and help Angel to arrange the salon classes, we were afraid would miss them from lots of people wanted to take it. When I was leaving, I had a small conversation with Nancy. But I was upset after that, for I could not expression very well what I wanted to say. Such as wanted to talk about book classes. It was hard to translate it in English, I have just arranged the salon classes to Angel. I have just add the one of WEB' students called Daniel which was as same as one of foreign teacher's name. And the worst thing is I was misconstrued by my co-worker who is always ordered me to do everything, and I am always not willing to do. actually we had a bad relationship for a long time.
