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字数：300 满分：100分
结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Save money is very necessary to us.As a student, I usually spend the money which is paid from my parent.I am only a consumer who I have not enough powerto work.So we must be learned how to save money. With the development of the sicity,many teenager offen buy expensive clothes or shoes under without any discount .They are usually compared it with other classmates.It is very rediculious.It is obviously that we should learn how to save money rathen than spend money to buy useless things.Other sample is that parents give their childern pocket money but they are not teached their how suitable to use.So we should be learned by yourself. In my opinion, we should learn how to save money and release our parents abandon.Namely, save money is play a vital role in out life.
