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MY HOMETOWN Huizhou My hometown is located in southeast of china and belong to Guangdong province.it is a so beautiful place that attract many tourist the weather there was warm and wet ,it is a comfortable cite which is suitable for living. when it comes to the place that i could like to take my best friend to is west lake.you will not really understand the beauty it had if you havn"t see it by your own eyes .the speacially peace it take to me is from my heart .my mameries came back just as the flood rush into my brain when l saw the lake with wave.
