2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

People often says that:Where there is a will,there is a way.And someone could be inspired likes that if he is depressed.The reason why we often heard of this idiom is that many people believe in nothing secceeds without a strong will. A lot of successful things are shows we the truth that only a person who has a strong will he could be successful.For example,the exploration of moon was final be came true because the workers never gives up to try,and many famous people made success in their works due to they have a strong heart. So the students does,they will never be successful unless they can continue to work hard,hard working as the same important of talent,which are contributes to make achievements in one's career.At the same time,the strong will is also a vital factor to have a happy life.