文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
He felt her sadness through her eyes. She has a large sum of money in her account. This stock must rise. Half the salaries of mine to spend in tuition investment. The weather station warns all kinds of weather from everywhere very accurately. I am not paying off my debt of tuition until next August.