文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
He felt her sadness through her eyes. She has a large sum of money in her account. This stock must rise. Half the salaries of mine to spend in tuition investment. The weather station reports all kinds of weather from everywhere very accurately. I am not paying off my debt until next August.