2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Nowadays,many parents send their kids to art class,such as,painting,writing and so on.They all want their kids to a success people. For this phenomenon,people hold different ideas.Some of them believe send kids to art class,which is right.On the one hand,kids to attend art class can enrich amateur life.In the other hand children have more feeling than those who are't sent to art class. As a coin has two sides.The others oppose this idea.They claim that children are too tired to attend art class.There are a lot of courses in the school.In other things,they think they should choose whether to go to art class rights for children. As far as I'm concerned,children should be willing to go to art class .And appropriate to attend art classes is beneficial for children.