小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

He felt her sadness through expression in her eyes. She has a large sum of money in her account. This stock must rise. Half the salaries of mine to spend in tuition investment. The weather station reports all kinds of weather from everywhere very accurately. I am paying a debt about my tuition since last August and will stop it next August.