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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
Nowadays,many parents in china are finishing all the things for their children,so that now many children especially the children in cities are very dependent on their parents in daily life. So many parents thinks that will have a good effect on the children's growth,but to be honesty , it is not help for children's round development,especially for the capacity of deal with the personal probelms in their daily life.That's why now many chinese students are not good at practicing but do well in study and test. As far as I concerned,in order to improve the child's ability of life,parents should teach children to finsih their works by themselves and teach them how to do the choice in their own business,which will contributes to children's development,and it is also very helpful for children to be independent.
