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From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com To: sales-department@hotmail.com subject: check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received 3,000 product from your company . According to our signing of the No.35 order ,the quanity is 3,500pcs, the extra 500pcs didn't received still now . So could you check your product list and reply us as early as possible. Best regards, wanghaiyang
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