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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.
行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。
Recently,the secound part of "Where are we going,dad?" is very popular.There was a set of programs which was Hulun Bwir Grassland,And it is my hometown that have fresh air,green lawn ,herds of cattle and flocks of sheep. Relative to the first part,the secound part upgrad in content and form.So it is more popular. In my opinion,this program makes father close their kinds which can help children grown up more happy and more healthy .And giving a chance for fathers to have a rest.
