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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。
Recently,the second part of a program that named "Where are we going,dad?" is very popular.There was a set of programs which was Hulun Bwir Grassland,And it is my hometown that have fresh air,green lawn,herds of cattle and flocks of sheep. Relative to the first part,the second part upgrades in content and form.So it is more popular. In my opinion,this program makes father close their kinds which can help children grown up happier and more healthy .And giving a chance for fathers to have a rest.
